Sneak Peek of my new book: Darkened Shadows

Hi!This is Vania and this is a book I'm writing now,here's a sneak peek at it:

Darkpaw's heart was pounding in her chest as she followed the patrol.She reered back at the border line.
"fresh!"
Bramblepaw passed her onto enemy territory.
"Are you scared,little kit?"
He sneered.Sharkpaw and Autumnpaw ran ahead with Snakepaw and Willowpaw on there tails.Darkpaw hissed at Bramblepaw.
"In your dreams,mousebrain!"
She ran ahead,flooded by the smell of Blazeclan.Gorsepaw padded toward her.
"Did Bramblepaw tease you again?"
His eyes twinkled in the moonlight.
"I'm fine,let's go follow the patrol."
Darkpaw caught sight of Blazeclan camp.
"Ready?",Gorsepaw said.
"Never been more ready."
Her midnight-black fur blended into the darkness,only her green eyes could be seen in the shadows.She heard the warning cry of a cat,knowing at that moment:

This. Is.

WAR.

A Letter to Santa

Dear Santa,

For Christmas I would like the super Mario Kart for Nintendo Ds. It has multiplayer and single player races. It also has extras like boosters for the karts. My 3 reasons are because I do all my homework, I have bought gifts for my best friends, and the last one is that I am always loyal to my friends.

I always do my homework and always get it done. I keep doing it no mader what. Maybe i'll stop just to sleep, but nothing else. So I can keep going. I have my mom (and dad sometimes) to keep me up. I am really good at doing my homework so I can get a good grade (and presents now!).

My second reason is that I bought gifts for my best friends. It took me sometime and I am still going to wrap them up! I picked out two books for them. I picked them just to there style so they will like it very much. Now do you see why I shoud have my present!

My thrid reason is that I am always loyal to my friends. I gave the vampireology to Kate to read just like I said. Also the gifts I gave my friends. At the games I play, I always play fair (well, maybe sometimes I have cheats.).

Well, that's all my reasons I was good this year. To me, think I had some good reasons. I think I should get the gift. Remember I was very good this year!

comment by dad: This is one of Vania's homework before Christmas. Very funny. Some typos are kept as they are in the original text.